Offer Negotiation Response

Subject: RE: Your Offer for [Job Title] at [Your Company]

Dear [Candidate Name],

Thank you for your thoughtful response to our offer and for sharing your considerations regarding [specific negotiation points mentioned by candidate].

After careful consideration of your request, I'm pleased to provide the following updates to our offer:

Revised Terms:

• [Response to specific request 1, e.g., "Salary: We can increase the base salary to $X"]

• [Response to specific request 2, e.g., "Equity: We've adjusted the equity grant to X shares"]

• [Response to specific request 3 or explanation of elements that cannot be adjusted]

[If applicable: While we're unable to accommodate your request regarding [specific element], we hope the adjustments made in other areas demonstrate our commitment to bringing you on board.]

These revised terms reflect both your value to our organization and our compensation structure for this role. The updated offer letter is attached for your review.

Please let us know if these terms are acceptable by [deadline]. We'd be happy to schedule a call to discuss any questions you might have about the revised offer.

We remain very excited about the prospect of you joining [Your Company] and believe you'll be a valuable addition to our team.

Best regards, [Your Name] [Your Title] [Your Company] [Contact Information]